The brave tall young man. Swims in the beautiful shining pool. The man has a flexible body. The pool is very deep. He is pulled down by gravity. The tall young man is swimming in the very deep pool to get to the end.
Hi Eva, I love your descriptive paragraph. I like the way you ended your paragraph with a strong concluding sentence that restated the main point of your description. Keep up the awesome work. Mrs Carruthers
Kia orana Eva,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem, I love the adjectives you have used.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more of your work.
Love Mum
Hi Eva, I love your descriptive paragraph. I like the way you ended your paragraph with a strong concluding sentence that restated the main point of your description. Keep up the awesome work.
ReplyDeleteMrs Carruthers