My paragraph

The brave tall young man. Swims in the beautiful shining pool. The man has a flexible body. The pool is very deep. He is pulled down by gravity. The tall young man is swimming in the very deep pool to get to the end.

My holiday

Two weeks ago it was the holidays.  I was so excited because I was packing my bag to go on a family trip. With my cousin and my family. We are going to Taupo. We are going there for some fun and for some family time together. In Tapo on Friday I woke up and saw the glorious sun shining beautifully. I got out of bed and went up stairs to the table. I saw some elegant yum pancakes. On the stunning table I saw some glorious delicious bacon for breakfast. After we had breakfast we hopped in the and dad took us to the mountain where it has snowed. We has lots of fun in the snow. We had snow ball fights and we made a snow man. When it was time to go we all hoped in the car. We all felt cold and wet. Then we went back home.when I was going back home I went into Rotorua for a surprise. Me my cousin and my sisters didn’t know what the surprise was so we just had to wait. When I got back in Auckland it was dark and cold. By the time I got home everyone one was super tired we all went up stairs to lay down. Until I head my mum calling for us we dashed to the bed and when she found us she asked if we wanted to have a  movie night. We all said “Yes!” Then we went to the landing to set up  the sofa. After we finally finish setting up the sofa we watched the movie.

I had a wonderful time with my family.

Making fairy bread

One Monday Morning it was a wet  and cold day. I walked into class and saw that things looked  different. When I hung my bag I opened the door and sat at a table in room 20. Mrs Carruthers gave me a paper towl and a knife because we was going to make some lovely gorgeous fairy bread. We made it so that we could have fun and so we could write a recount. First I got some bread from the bag and put it on my paper towl. Next mrs Carruthers got out some butter and told rooms 19 and 20 to spread it out evenly. Then mrs Carruthers got the sprinkles out and we got to put it on our bread. It looked so cool. Then we got to eat it. After that we made one more but this time we made it with Nutella. Finally we got to eat it and it was so delicious.

Mya the caterpillar.

One sunny lovely morning there was a caterpillar called Mya she lived in a lovely forest. It had lots of tall trees and colourful flowers and lots of good to eat. One gorgeous day Mya had just got up from sleeping she was so hungry and she saw a tree with lots of apples. So she went up and ate all the apples. Mya was so tired she was going to be a beautiful butterfly. She had to get home but she could not remember the way back. Mya tried and tired but she just couldn't remember the way home. Mya had to get home by sun-down. If Mya didn't she couldn't turn into a butterfly. Mya walked and walked but she just got lost then she started to cry. Suddenly another butterfly came along and her name was Meagn. Meagn said to Mya "are you ok" "no" said Mya "I need to get back to my home tree but I don't remember the way". "You can come on my back and I will tack you home" said Magn. So Mya hopped on her back home. When they got there Mya climbed up and hung upside-down into a cocoon. The next day the cocoon started to break and then an stunning butterfly came out and started to play. Finally Mya had become a gorgeous butterfly.

The End

Matariki day

Last week on Friday I went to Room 17 because it was Matariki. My teacher was Ms Hockly. Ms Hockly made a god's eye in the weekend. It looked so cool. Ms Hockly told me and the class haw to make it. It was so fun making god's eye so I decided to make one more. Then the bell rang. It was for morning tea so I took my lunch and went outside. I went to the park with Legacy and we went on the bridge. When we were  going there I slipped on the mud and hurt my leg. Legacy helped me to the office. I waited for my mum to come and pick me up so I could go home. When I got home I went on my bed and lay down.

The zoo trip

On Thursday the 31st of may when I was walking to school I saw the double decker bus. I knew that it was the day my class will be going to the zoo trip I was so happy I ran so fast then I saw my friend Legacy Salima so I went to her and we walked back to class. When we got there we saw that it was time to go to the zoo so we went on the bus. When we got there I saw some really cool Tasmania devils they looked so,so,so cut and cheeky. Then I went to see the big lions that was sleeping and there hands made a heart it was so cool. When it was time to go back to school we went back on the bus and I wen back to school.

Alex believes all zoo should be shut down because they can not provide the right environment for animals that should live in the wild,

I think 

I disagree with Alex because I think that all zoo can help animals and keep them safe. The zoo help us to learn about animals. It helps the animals then they are hurt. Zoo can tech us about all the lovely animals.

Vika think

I argee with Eva because animals can help us learn. Zoo keep them safe. Animals don't can get hurt even killed.

Legacy thinks 

I agree that zoos are good but have you thought that animals don't get hurt at the zoo because the zookeeper look after them.

The final respond

I agree With Legacy that animals can die. I also with vika that animal can help us.

The story of Legacy the fuzzy bunny

One enioyable day as the beautiful sun rose up into the lovely sky. The autumn sun melted down the show. There was a fuzzy bunny called Legacy. Legacy lived in a gigantic lovely tree. One windy cloudy day Legacy went for a long walk in the forest to collect an enormous group of carrots from 

Mr Gaps garden. Then she went dark home and made a large trap. Suddenly that night when Legacy had gone to sleep someone had cut down Legacy tree and had talked it to thir home. Legacy was so sad that the man had cut down her tree and Legacy was about to have babys but she had no home for them. So Legacy went to go find a new home for her and the babies. She came past a nest but the bird who was in it did't want to share her nest so Legacy went to find another home. Then she saw a light so she went to the light and she came to a amazing garden. It had lovely flowers and in the garden she saw a big tree just the right size for her and her babys. So she went inside and and had her babies and she had a warm home again.

And  they all lived happly every after.

The End

Metal Head and Legacy

Once a upon a time there was a little tiny robot and his name was Metal Head. He had a broken light for his head and a spring for his leg and a Balts for  the other leg. Metal Head lived in a scrap yard were everything was filled with broken machines and old wires, old rusty cars and fat tyres. Metal Head did not like his home because he had no friends and was so sad. One day he went for a walk and he found a plag so he ripped some tape off his body and made a smile. The smil was for his friend the plag because he only had 2 eyes he sat down next to the plag. Then he waited and waited and waited but the plag did't talk. Then Metal Head pushed the plug but it was no use. So he went for a walk and he came to a car. He jumped on the car and found a stick. So he tryed to put it it on his arm and BOOM! He electrocuted himself. Metal Head was so sad so he sat down until another robot came Metal Head said "hello  there" the other robot had a fan for her head and a coin machine for her body. Her name was Legacy Legacy and Metal Head went for a walk and they down and Metal Head saw that Legacy had a arm like his so he asked if he could connect. Ok said Legacy so they joined arms and stayed connected for the rest of their lives

The End.

Happy Mother

Dear mummy,

Happy mother day fateie for the meie ma fateie for captaing oral camer. Fateie for capaing oral bokoo. Ma fateie for sawl oral gvale. Ma fateie for byeing 

me savie. All the best love from: Eva

Force and motion

On Monday the 30th Aprl was the first day of term. I was so excited, happy and ready to go back to class. After arsemble I went back to class and I sat on the mat spilenly and wait for my teacher instruction. My teacher told me that I with be doing on work but I with be doing same fun activities I was so excited and interesting that the same time.                                                                                                                                                                              

          

 The first game I did was the iPad game. The iPad game was a marble run game I had to draw my own marble run. Then I got to creative and design my own marble run. After design I pushed the go button and the shiny ball rolled down into a box and down the ramp then the ball hit a giant wheel forceing the wheel to go down with lots of gravity and knock down lots of objects and hit the rocket to blus of in the air.

After my teacher said" stop look and listen" and told me that I am going to move to the car ramps. So I walked out the door and got one of the cars. Then I got some big hard cardboard and made a ramp and the ramp looked like a incline plane. Then my teacher said" stop look and listen it's time to pack up".   So I packed up the hard cardboard and then came back inside and sat on the mat. Then the bell rang so I went to lunch.

I enjoyed the day because it was such a fun day.

Omaru creek

Once a upon a time there was a slimy  long and thick eel called C.P but he was also very kind. He lived in a polluted creek were only you can see dark gloomy wate and slimy grasy plants and unhealthy tree's and the creek was called Omaru creek. One beautiful sunny day just before my birthday. I get very sick and every day I get more sick. Not so long into my birthday I get better. But when I went to Omaru creek I saw that it was getting more polluted. Suddenly C.P the eel saw same kind's playing at Omaru creek. The kid were very kind and there names was Max and Paulah. They also C.P and the creek and how it was polluted so Max said to Paulah" look at Omaru creek it is so Polluted you can't see the water and everything is polluted". So then they took C.P back home and asked there mum if they could give him a new home. The mum said" yes". So they kept the eel, and  when C.P grew big they let him go into a new creek where he find lots of lovely food to eat and everything was glorious. The next day C.P was so depressed because today was his birthday and nobody was there for his birthday he was orain and unnappy so he went around for a wallk. Into he came to a stop of a cage and then C.P hard something. So he went inside and surprise his family was there and everything was decorated so they celebrated his birthday together and live in there naw creek.

The end.